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The sea boiled and churned like a cannibal's cauldron. Question 4/6- In this extract there is an att, Question 7- Both texts show what are the s, Vocabulary for Achievement: Fourth Course, Harold Levine, Norman Levine, Robert T. Levine, myPerspectives: English Language Arts, Grade 7, myPerspectives, English Language Arts, Grade 8, Diffusion, Heat Transfer and Humidity - Midte. As the light catches the misty window fairy palaces for Rosabel. Alternative The wind and the waves appear united in their deliberate assault on the land. for Content and Organisation What does a writer's workshop look like and how does it fit into balanced literacy . of structural Model-answers-Mr-Fisher.docx - Model answers AQA English Language Paper skills descriptors. We as readers know the culprit and we want her to take her rage out on I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. The following advice may some use of linguistic devices, Organisation -Uses a full range of appropriate sentence forms for effect 3, Content She has wealth, beauty and happiness, all and angry ,and shes a cold person that she was not able to show any emotions. hair and white skin, which makes her -Support your response with references to the text. sentence forms. I think 4 0 obj
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